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October 5, 2009 by Scott W. Smith

Ellen Page can skate. Really skate. Roller derby-style to boot. That alone makes Drew Barrymore’s directorial debut Whip It worth seeing. But wait, there’s more….

Most people know Page for her Juno role, but the 22-year-old Oscar nominated actress from Nova Scotia already has a decade old career having been in over 25 films and TV programs. We know Page can act but it’s special to watch the actress continue to blossom. Special in that way you see Elizabeth Taylor in A Place in the Sun or Paul Newman in The Hustler where you see great talent being revealed.

Many actors have stumbled in trying to play convincing roles as an athlete so I appreciate it when it’s done well. It was not a safe choice for Page or Barrymore, but they pulled it off.

Now I remember the roller derby in its 1970s incarnation.  Not that I was really a fan, but back then the roller derby was hard to miss because in a pre-cable TV and Internet world you only had three main channels to chose from. So on weekends somewhere between bowling, fishing and wrestling you had the roller derby. The roller derby was popular enough in the 70s to have a few films made about it including Unholy Rollers (1972), the documentary Derby (1972) and Raquel Welch in Kansas City Bomber (1972)–and let’s throw in the futuristic Rollerball (1975) for good measure.

Today the revival in roller derby is relatively small in comparison which may account for the soft opening this weekend at the box office. (That and people can’t seem to get enough of zombies.) But Barrymore and screenwriter Shauna Cross have put together a fine and entertaining film that also has a layer of wisdom in it, so I think it will continue to gather a following for years to come.

There is one scene, one line in particular (and this gives nothing away) that I thought was brilliant. It’s when Page’s character simply says, “I don’t want to be that girl.” It’s a moment that I don’t remember ever seeing in a film before and would benefit every teenage girl who is feed a steady diet of pop culture in regard to relationships. (Also part of that relationship plotline involves a t-shirt from the 80s Christian heavy metal band Stryper. I got a kick out of that as back in my L.A. days as a 16mm director and cameraman I shot an interview with Stryper’s lead singer Michael Sweet. If I find some photos from that shoot I’ll post them.)

At its core, Whip It is a coming-of-age story. Or as Save the Cat screenwriting teacher Blake Snyder calls it a rite of passage (ROP);

“The ROP yarn…has three telling indicator: (1) The Problem, (2) the ‘wrong way’ to fix it, and (3) the solution to the problem: acceptance.'”

There are trampings involved with any genre and it’s hard to be original when you are dealing with a story that centers around sports, but I think Barrymore and Cross bring some subtle nuances to the film. One being the role of the parents played by Marica Gay Harden and Daniel Stern. Stern of course brings clout not only with his Wonder Years background, but as being in one of the greatest coming-of-age films/sports films ever—Breaking Away. Great casting choice. And way to go in not making the parents total dorks. (Took a page from Juno there.)

From a screenwriting perspective I do think they missed a huge opportunity to show some three dimensionality by at least giving a nod to the fact that the tribe some girls may want to be in is being in beauty pageants. What if Page’s best friend in the film would have really been gung-ho for doing the pageant thing? That’s the kind of dynamic that made John Hughes films like The Breakfast Club stand out. We’re all different and we’re all in this together.

Recently actress Sela Ward, who was raised in Mississippi, said this in an interview with Parade magazine;  “Growing up in the South, it’s all about manners and propriety. Every weekend, I went to charm school at the Sears department store, where I learned such fabulous tidbits as how to blot your face with a damp cloth to remove some of the powder and give yourself a little glow.” Not every girl is going to grow up and be dignified, refined and as graceful as Sela Ward. But those traits haven’t hurt her career any and there is still a man or two who finds that more attractive than blood and tattoos.

Two other missed opportunities were on the sound track. The dry opening to the film would have benefitted from a jump start montage of the roller derby girls intercut with shots of Page’s character getting ready for a beauty pageant with the song Roller Derby Saved My Soul by Uncle Leon and the Alibis playing. And on the credits Devo’s Whit It would have been a fitting tribute and left audiences with a big smile.

Whip It may not be as insightful as the classic Texas movie  The Last Picture Show, but you could put it on the shelf with the old John Travolta/Debra Winger film Urban Cowboy. It’s a fun film with a few life lessons thrown in, and a wonderful start for Barrymore. And she can really skate, too.

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  1. on October 5, 2009 at 7:04 am Screenwriting From Iowa » Whip It (part 2)

    […] Ellen Page can skate. Really skate. Roller derby-style to boot. That alone makes Drew Barrymore’s directorial debut Whip It worth seeing. But wait, there’s more…. Most people know Page for her Juno role, but the 22-year-old Oscar nominated actress from Nova Scotia already has a decade old career having been in over 25 films and TV […] Original Source… […]


  2. on October 5, 2009 at 10:36 am Carolynn

    I can’t wait to see this film…but I also can’t resist disagreeing with your first suggestion about how it could have been improved. (Keeping in mind I have NOT seen it yet, only read about million articles about it…) 🙂

    You note: “I do think they missed a huge opportunity to show some three dimensionality by at least giving a nod to the fact that the tribe some girls may want to be in is being in beauty pageants….Not every girl is going to grow up and be dignified, refined and as graceful as Sela Ward. But those traits haven’t hurt her career any and there is still a man or two who finds that more attractive than blood and tattoos.”

    From what I can tell, that’s really the whole POINT of this film. That girls and women can defy the stereotypes and STILL be likeable, attractive and successful. I mean really- how many stories do we already have about women who naturally, or through ‘admirable’ dedication and hard work, fill the role of “dignified, refined and graceful” in order to meet society’s expectations and ultimately ‘get the guy’? (i.e. Pretty Woman, He’s Just Not That Into You, pretty much every Disney movie ever made, every ugly-duckling-turned-into-a-swan movie ever made, including the problematic final montage in Breakfast Club where the amazing Ally Sheedy is made over to be more stereotypically beautiful).

    Don’t get me wrong, I love Sela Ward, but her experience is, in some ways, really a symptom of the problem. Women who defy those southern stereotypes are still, in 2009, seen as transgressive and off-putting. Of course being ‘dignified, refined and graceful’ hasn’t hurt Ms. Ward’s career- those are all the things women are ‘supposed’ to be! She plays the part perfectly. But not all women are comfortable playing that part.

    From what I can tell, I think Drew Barrymore was trying specifically in this movie to turn that stereotype on its head. Girls DON’T have to be stereotypically pretty, demure or well-behaved. They can be as rough, ‘undignified’ and outrageous a they’d like. And *gasp*, that’s ok! They can still find happiness and fulfillment, and (whew!) they can still find that special someone. And frankly, I think the point is that there are people who find ‘blood and tattoos’ just as attractive as the sweet southern belle, and probably more so.

    I don’t think it’s a missed opportunity that the lead character eschews the pageant lifestyle for the roller derby. I think it’s actually the reason the film can and will resonate with so many people. Women who feel as though they don’t fit in because they’re not ‘feminine’ enough, men who have tomboy sisters or life-partners, gay women who often feel that they strain against gender stereotypes on a daily basis… Yes, women who choose NOT to fit into the feminine stereotype can still be three dimensional.

    Whip It seems to be a movie whose message about empowerment, individuality and what’s “ok” for a women to do is still revolutionary, no matter how ‘far we’ve come’. Movies like this are still relevant and important because indeed we still have a long way yet to go.

    (See also: Bend it like Beckham, G.I. Jane, Whale Rider Girlfight, Fried Green Tomatoes, etc.)

    By the way, if my opinion changes after I see the movie, I’ll let you know! 🙂


  3. on October 6, 2009 at 12:58 am Scott W. Smith

    Carolynn,

    Thanks for reading the post and for writing such a detailed response.

    I agree as you said, “Drew Barrymore was trying specifically in this movie to turn that stereotype on its head.” And I’m fine with that, but I’m also more than fine with a woman who embraces the Sela Ward version of femininity.

    Barrymore seems to make it a black and white world where beauty pageants are bad and roller derby is good. I personally think it would have made a better film to show Ellen Page’s character wrestle with those two worlds and come away with lessons from both.

    After all isn’t that the world Barrymore has lived in her entire life? It’s not all tattoos & blood.

    In fact, yesterday I happened to see a beautiful picture of Barrymore on the cover of In Style magazine who looked every inch the Cover Girl model and spokesperson that she is.


  4. on October 6, 2009 at 10:31 am Carolynn

    You’re right, Scott- Drew Barrymore certainly lives a Cover Girl life…the glamorous life to which most women strive. That’s the accepted, expected, and rewarded path for American women to take, no doubt about it.

    Which is why Whip It’s resistance to follow the stereotype is such a breath of fresh air, to me.

    But there’s no accounting for personal taste, I guess, right? 🙂 (And I don’t think Drew even wrote the screenplay for the movie, right? So I probably totally derailed your blog!)

    Thanks for the dialogue!


  5. on October 7, 2009 at 6:10 am Annie

    Hey Scott,

    I saw “Whip It” and I didn’t get the “pageants are bad” message at all. She didn’t make fun of them like in “Drop Dead Gorgeous,” or make the pageant world seem creepy like in “Little Miss Sunshine.” It’s just that Bliss didn’t want to be involved in that world.

    The movie wasn’t really about what some girls like and other girls don’t, or “beauty” vs. “blood,” it was about Bliss making a decision to make herself happy (roller derby) instead of making her mother happy (pageants).

    Just my two cents.

    Annie


  6. on October 14, 2009 at 6:17 am Whip It (part 1) « Screenwriting from Iowa

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