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		<title>Comment on John Irving, Iowa &#38; Writing by The Juno–Iowa Connection &#171; Screenwriting from Iowa</title>
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		<dc:creator>The Juno–Iowa Connection &#171; Screenwriting from Iowa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 May 2008 16:55:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] For more about Iowa and Diablo Cody read the post Life Beyond Hollywood. To read about about University of Iowa graduate John Updike read Iowa, John Updike. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] For more about Iowa and Diablo Cody read the post Life Beyond Hollywood. To read about about University of Iowa graduate John Updike read Iowa, John Updike. [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Life Beyond Hollywood by The Juno–Iowa Connection &#171; Screenwriting from Iowa</title>
		<link>http://screenwritingfromiowa.wordpress.com/2008/01/22/life-beyond-hollywood/#comment-240</link>
		<dc:creator>The Juno–Iowa Connection &#171; Screenwriting from Iowa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 May 2008 13:47:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] For more about Iowa and Diablo Cody read the post Life Beyond Hollywood.  [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on David Lynch in Iowa by stalherz</title>
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		<dc:creator>stalherz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 May 2008 14:09:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great story on him.  Negativity is the enemy indeed. I needed that today, so thanks for putting it out there.

As For Mullholand Drive, I watched that again, this time with my wife, who had never seen it before. I could never understand who that creature was behind the dumpster. After one viewing, she turned to me and said - "That's the woman who got into an accident and stumbled out of the car not knowing who she was. She's living as a homeless now."

I think all of his films have meaning - nothing is just random - it's just a different part of our brain that we have to use to watch them.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great story on him.  Negativity is the enemy indeed. I needed that today, so thanks for putting it out there.</p>
<p>As For Mullholand Drive, I watched that again, this time with my wife, who had never seen it before. I could never understand who that creature was behind the dumpster. After one viewing, she turned to me and said - &#8220;That&#8217;s the woman who got into an accident and stumbled out of the car not knowing who she was. She&#8217;s living as a homeless now.&#8221;</p>
<p>I think all of his films have meaning - nothing is just random - it&#8217;s just a different part of our brain that we have to use to watch them.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Screenwriting &#38; Structure (tip #5) by Scott W. Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Scott W. Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Apr 2008 19:21:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Nick,

Thanks for stopping by and your encouraging comments. 

I will add that not everyone agrees with classic three-act structure in film these days. Tom Lazarus who wrote the script for "Stigmata" and teaches at UCLA writes in his book "Secrets of Film Writing": "The classic three-act structure...in my admittedly controversial opinion, is horribly outdated as a structure for motion picture scripts."

The main reason for this Lazarus says is because audiences have become story hip and expect our entertainment at a faster paced. But six years after his book was published a little classically structured film called "Juno" won audiences (over $140 million domestic) and an Oscar for best original screenplay for Diablo Cody.  

So classic structure is not dead. As Robert McKee says, "The Archplot is neither ancient nor modern; Western nor Eastern; it is human." Apparently even a post-MTV music generation understands and appeciates a story well told via classic structure.  

And may I point out that last year as well a visually interesting yet sprawling film "The Darjeeling Limited" failed big at the box office. 

Not to say all non-archplot or antiplot films fail at the box office, it's just a tougher sell. And it's a tougher sell for the screenwriter trying to get his or her screenplay sold when they avoid classic structure.

I think where counter-culture shines in movies is in the content not the structure. I think it's fair to say that Juno's story of adoption was counter-cultural and no studio would have thought about making that film ten years ago.

We need counter-cultural stories to keep us on our toes. "The 40 Year Old Version" was crass, yet counter-cultural at the same time. Perhaps the lesson there is if you are going to be counter-cultural make people laugh.

As films get cheaper to make I think you will see filmmakers become more provocative. Certainly, after Enron, the housing market downturn, and the economy in general the time is rip for a counter-cultural story with consumerism as the backdrop.

You might even get Jack Johnson to do the music.

Scott</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Nick,</p>
<p>Thanks for stopping by and your encouraging comments. </p>
<p>I will add that not everyone agrees with classic three-act structure in film these days. Tom Lazarus who wrote the script for &#8220;Stigmata&#8221; and teaches at UCLA writes in his book &#8220;Secrets of Film Writing&#8221;: &#8220;The classic three-act structure&#8230;in my admittedly controversial opinion, is horribly outdated as a structure for motion picture scripts.&#8221;</p>
<p>The main reason for this Lazarus says is because audiences have become story hip and expect our entertainment at a faster paced. But six years after his book was published a little classically structured film called &#8220;Juno&#8221; won audiences (over $140 million domestic) and an Oscar for best original screenplay for Diablo Cody.  </p>
<p>So classic structure is not dead. As Robert McKee says, &#8220;The Archplot is neither ancient nor modern; Western nor Eastern; it is human.&#8221; Apparently even a post-MTV music generation understands and appeciates a story well told via classic structure.  </p>
<p>And may I point out that last year as well a visually interesting yet sprawling film &#8220;The Darjeeling Limited&#8221; failed big at the box office. </p>
<p>Not to say all non-archplot or antiplot films fail at the box office, it&#8217;s just a tougher sell. And it&#8217;s a tougher sell for the screenwriter trying to get his or her screenplay sold when they avoid classic structure.</p>
<p>I think where counter-culture shines in movies is in the content not the structure. I think it&#8217;s fair to say that Juno&#8217;s story of adoption was counter-cultural and no studio would have thought about making that film ten years ago.</p>
<p>We need counter-cultural stories to keep us on our toes. &#8220;The 40 Year Old Version&#8221; was crass, yet counter-cultural at the same time. Perhaps the lesson there is if you are going to be counter-cultural make people laugh.</p>
<p>As films get cheaper to make I think you will see filmmakers become more provocative. Certainly, after Enron, the housing market downturn, and the economy in general the time is rip for a counter-cultural story with consumerism as the backdrop.</p>
<p>You might even get Jack Johnson to do the music.</p>
<p>Scott</p>
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		<title>Comment on Screenwriting &#38; Structure (tip #5) by forgewrite</title>
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		<dc:creator>forgewrite</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 09:00:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just read the post a third time.

I would like to make one comment about counter culture.

With out the counter culture we can not truly appreciate the structure that allows our daily life to function with ease.

In the case of a door.  We would never love the door for what it is, if we had never learned that it could be built another way.

The counterculture door stands as a decoration to everyday structure.  It displays the old methods and presents them with  new light.

Thanks again for the post, I really do love this one.

Nick</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just read the post a third time.</p>
<p>I would like to make one comment about counter culture.</p>
<p>With out the counter culture we can not truly appreciate the structure that allows our daily life to function with ease.</p>
<p>In the case of a door.  We would never love the door for what it is, if we had never learned that it could be built another way.</p>
<p>The counterculture door stands as a decoration to everyday structure.  It displays the old methods and presents them with  new light.</p>
<p>Thanks again for the post, I really do love this one.</p>
<p>Nick</p>
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		<title>Comment on Screenwriting &#38; Structure (tip #5) by forgewrite</title>
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		<dc:creator>forgewrite</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 08:53:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I must say, this is the best online article on screen writing I have read.  Ever.

No Joke.

You even quote David Mamet.  I am really impressed.

Please, for the love of film, keep this blog running.  Your content is educated and resourceful.

You have a new dedicated reader.

Thanks again.

Nick</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I must say, this is the best online article on screen writing I have read.  Ever.</p>
<p>No Joke.</p>
<p>You even quote David Mamet.  I am really impressed.</p>
<p>Please, for the love of film, keep this blog running.  Your content is educated and resourceful.</p>
<p>You have a new dedicated reader.</p>
<p>Thanks again.</p>
<p>Nick</p>
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		<title>Comment on Learning to be &#8220;Good in a Room&#8221; (part 2) by Bridget Wright</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bridget Wright</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Apr 2008 16:47:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have been a Toastmaster for a number of years now and I LOVE it! It has got to be one of the best decisions I made when I decided to become a professional speaker. They are very supportive and although structured, you are sure to learn a lot in your time there. Well worth the minimal investment.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have been a Toastmaster for a number of years now and I LOVE it! It has got to be one of the best decisions I made when I decided to become a professional speaker. They are very supportive and although structured, you are sure to learn a lot in your time there. Well worth the minimal investment.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Learning to be &#8220;Good in a Room&#8221; (part 2) by Scott W. Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Scott W. Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Apr 2008 14:30:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One of the best things about Toastmasters is there are all levels of speakers that join and it is a very supportive and encouraging group. You can move at your own pace. Just sit and watch, be a timer, do short Table Topics of 1-2 minutes, or sign up right away to begin working through a speaking a manuel. 

And every group has a couple really solid speakers who you will learn a ton from as well.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One of the best things about Toastmasters is there are all levels of speakers that join and it is a very supportive and encouraging group. You can move at your own pace. Just sit and watch, be a timer, do short Table Topics of 1-2 minutes, or sign up right away to begin working through a speaking a manuel. </p>
<p>And every group has a couple really solid speakers who you will learn a ton from as well.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Learning to be &#8220;Good in a Room&#8221; (part 2) by Andrew - Six Minutes Public Speaking Blog</title>
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		<dc:creator>Andrew - Six Minutes Public Speaking Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Apr 2008 14:08:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congratulations on completing your Competent Communicator milestone. Bravo! I hope you'll continue to master your public speaking skills in the advanced manuals.

Ditto everything you've said in this talk, and the quotes from Tom Peters. You &lt;em&gt;do&lt;/em&gt; speak better the more practice you get, and there's no better place than Toastmasters to get regular practice while you seek other opportunities to speak in your community, whether for your career, or for other interests.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations on completing your Competent Communicator milestone. Bravo! I hope you&#8217;ll continue to master your public speaking skills in the advanced manuals.</p>
<p>Ditto everything you&#8217;ve said in this talk, and the quotes from Tom Peters. You <em>do</em> speak better the more practice you get, and there&#8217;s no better place than Toastmasters to get regular practice while you seek other opportunities to speak in your community, whether for your career, or for other interests.</p>
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		<title>Comment on April Fools &#38; Screenwriting by Scott W. Smith</title>
		<link>http://screenwritingfromiowa.wordpress.com/2008/04/01/april-fools-screenwriting/#comment-149</link>
		<dc:creator>Scott W. Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Apr 2008 20:04:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Curt. That doc on Kerouac looks great. 

As far as mastering the spontaneous thing...well, I'm just trying to help people finish a marathon. I think the Asian mindset that mastery takes a lifetime is healthier than the American brand of instant success. Remember that every literary giant started out a beginner. And my understanding is Kerouac faced much literary rejection before "On the Road" and was taken back himself by its success.  

Some of you may know Kerouac spent some time in my hometown Orlando (where didn't he spend time?), but what you may not know is they have a writers-in-residence program there you can apply for and live and write were ole' Jack wrote "Dharma Bums." Check out this site: http://kerouacproject.org/application-page .

And for those Kerouac fans in the Midwest there is a bar in downtown Iowa City where Kerouac used to drink. Another Iowa reference from Kerouac's "On the Road"; "I woke up us the sun was reddening; and that was the one distinct time in my life, the strangest moment of all, when I didn't know who I was." I'm telling you there's something odd about Iowa.

Thanks again Curt for the web link (www.kerouacfilms.com) I look forward to seeing your film on Kerouac.

Scott</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Curt. That doc on Kerouac looks great. </p>
<p>As far as mastering the spontaneous thing&#8230;well, I&#8217;m just trying to help people finish a marathon. I think the Asian mindset that mastery takes a lifetime is healthier than the American brand of instant success. Remember that every literary giant started out a beginner. And my understanding is Kerouac faced much literary rejection before &#8220;On the Road&#8221; and was taken back himself by its success.  </p>
<p>Some of you may know Kerouac spent some time in my hometown Orlando (where didn&#8217;t he spend time?), but what you may not know is they have a writers-in-residence program there you can apply for and live and write were ole&#8217; Jack wrote &#8220;Dharma Bums.&#8221; Check out this site: <a href="http://kerouacproject.org/application-page" rel="nofollow">http://kerouacproject.org/application-page</a> .</p>
<p>And for those Kerouac fans in the Midwest there is a bar in downtown Iowa City where Kerouac used to drink. Another Iowa reference from Kerouac&#8217;s &#8220;On the Road&#8221;; &#8220;I woke up us the sun was reddening; and that was the one distinct time in my life, the strangest moment of all, when I didn&#8217;t know who I was.&#8221; I&#8217;m telling you there&#8217;s something odd about Iowa.</p>
<p>Thanks again Curt for the web link (www.kerouacfilms.com) I look forward to seeing your film on Kerouac.</p>
<p>Scott</p>
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