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		<title>By: Scott W. Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Scott W. Smith]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Apr 2010 14:29:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I watch good films over and over again and the experience gets richer and richer. The problem with bad films is they are harder to recall because I only see them once (and sometimes I can&#039;t even finish watching them) and they tend to be forgotton. So coming up with good examples is easier than remembering bad examples. 

But I know there have been more than one action movie that I&#039;ve been confused watching and where I usually feel like they are just covering up plot holes with more action. As if the director is saying, &quot;The audience won&#039;t know what&#039;s going on, but they won&#039;t notice (or care) because we have some killer special effects, chase scenes, and explosions.&quot;]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I watch good films over and over again and the experience gets richer and richer. The problem with bad films is they are harder to recall because I only see them once (and sometimes I can&#8217;t even finish watching them) and they tend to be forgotton. So coming up with good examples is easier than remembering bad examples. </p>
<p>But I know there have been more than one action movie that I&#8217;ve been confused watching and where I usually feel like they are just covering up plot holes with more action. As if the director is saying, &#8220;The audience won&#8217;t know what&#8217;s going on, but they won&#8217;t notice (or care) because we have some killer special effects, chase scenes, and explosions.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Cindy</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Apr 2010 14:16:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great examples!  I was trying to think of examples of poorly done reveals.  Where maybe you didn&#039;t enjoy the movie because you weren&#039;t &quot;equipped to enjoy what you were seeing.&quot;  My favorite kinds are when I am told (or shown) something is wrong or &quot;off&quot; yet I don&#039;t know what it is.  So I get the uneasiness, but also the thrill of trying to figure it out.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great examples!  I was trying to think of examples of poorly done reveals.  Where maybe you didn&#8217;t enjoy the movie because you weren&#8217;t &#8220;equipped to enjoy what you were seeing.&#8221;  My favorite kinds are when I am told (or shown) something is wrong or &#8220;off&#8221; yet I don&#8217;t know what it is.  So I get the uneasiness, but also the thrill of trying to figure it out.</p>
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		<title>By: Scott W. Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Scott W. Smith]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Apr 2010 18:22:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yeah, that might be its own post. But the simple answer is every film is different. Obviously, Hitchcock withheld key info until the end on “Psycho.” What Coppola says was Hitchcock was usually, “telling you things so that you were equipped to enjoy what you were seeing.” So it’s kind of on a need to know basis. What do you need to tell the audience for them to best enjoy the picture.

A popular example is on William Goldman’s “Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid” when we see this exchange before a gun fight:
Butch (Paul Newman): &quot;Kid there’s something I ought to tell you. I never shot anybody.&quot; 
Sundance (Redford): &quot;One hell of a time to tell me.&quot;

Maximum timing. 

On the other hand, in the opening scene of “Touch of Evil” we see a bomb planted in a car at the start which creates suspense since we know something the characters walking around are unaware about. 

Every film and every scene is different, but the key thing is to be deliberate in your choices aiming for maximum impact on the audience.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, that might be its own post. But the simple answer is every film is different. Obviously, Hitchcock withheld key info until the end on “Psycho.” What Coppola says was Hitchcock was usually, “telling you things so that you were equipped to enjoy what you were seeing.” So it’s kind of on a need to know basis. What do you need to tell the audience for them to best enjoy the picture.</p>
<p>A popular example is on William Goldman’s “Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid” when we see this exchange before a gun fight:<br />
Butch (Paul Newman): &#8220;Kid there’s something I ought to tell you. I never shot anybody.&#8221;<br />
Sundance (Redford): &#8220;One hell of a time to tell me.&#8221;</p>
<p>Maximum timing. </p>
<p>On the other hand, in the opening scene of “Touch of Evil” we see a bomb planted in a car at the start which creates suspense since we know something the characters walking around are unaware about. </p>
<p>Every film and every scene is different, but the key thing is to be deliberate in your choices aiming for maximum impact on the audience.</p>
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		<title>By: Cindy</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Apr 2010 14:02:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[&quot;Hitchcock was such a master about manipulating information for  the audience, usually telling you things so that you were equipped to enjoy what you were seeing —rather than withholding information, he would give you information.”

One of the things I find challenging is knowing how much info. to give and how much to withhold so it can creep out slowly.  There&#039;s the opinion which recommends to withhold most things unless an audience HAS to be told to understand.  How does this advice connect with what Hitchcock is saying?  How does he &quot;manipulate information&quot; so he doesn&#039;t have to withhold, but still have reveals?  It&#039;s a fine line that I have been struggling with a bit.  Any resources you know of that might be helpful?  Or...perhaps...a new post of your thoughts about this issue? :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Hitchcock was such a master about manipulating information for  the audience, usually telling you things so that you were equipped to enjoy what you were seeing —rather than withholding information, he would give you information.”</p>
<p>One of the things I find challenging is knowing how much info. to give and how much to withhold so it can creep out slowly.  There&#8217;s the opinion which recommends to withhold most things unless an audience HAS to be told to understand.  How does this advice connect with what Hitchcock is saying?  How does he &#8220;manipulate information&#8221; so he doesn&#8217;t have to withhold, but still have reveals?  It&#8217;s a fine line that I have been struggling with a bit.  Any resources you know of that might be helpful?  Or&#8230;perhaps&#8230;a new post of your thoughts about this issue? <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Screenwriting From Iowa » Writing “The Godfather” (take 3)</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Apr 2010 12:28:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] I first became aware of Francis Ford Coppola&#8217;s prompt book for The Godfather at Scott Myers&#8217; blog Go Into The Story. The book is several inches thick and it contains Mario Puzo&#8217;s book The Godfather with note after note by Coppola as he details the what parts he wants to extract and emphasize in the movie. The prompt [...]  Original Source&#8230; [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] I first became aware of Francis Ford Coppola&#8217;s prompt book for The Godfather at Scott Myers&#8217; blog Go Into The Story. The book is several inches thick and it contains Mario Puzo&#8217;s book The Godfather with note after note by Coppola as he details the what parts he wants to extract and emphasize in the movie. The prompt [...]  Original Source&#8230; [...]</p>
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